Thanks to NetGalley and Sourcebooks Fire for providing an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
Release Date: November 1st, 2016
288 Pages
Synopsis: Victoria Zell doesn’t fit in, but she’s okay with that. All she needs is the company of her equally oddball boyfriend, Andrew. She doesn’t care what anyone else thinks…until magnetic, charming, mysterious Z comes into her life, and she starts lying to everyone she knows in an effort to unravel his secrets.
And then something terrible happens. Someone is dead and it’s time for Victoria to come clean. Interspersed with news clippings, and police interviews, Victoria tells her story to Andrew, revealing her dark, horrible secrets…secrets that have finally come back to haunt her.
I’ve read every book by Cyn Balog, and what I’ve learned is that she can be counted on for storytelling that is like no other. Unnatural Deeds is an eerie and haunting tale that kept me guessing right up until the end. The story is told in the second person by Victoria as she narrates what has happened to her boyfriend Andrew. Kudos to Balog just for pulling this complicated technique off successfully. I’m not generally fond of second person narration but honestly, Balog is such an accomplished writer that this was done seamlessly. I did however run into problems with the characters. While I liked that Victoria was an unreliable narrator, I thought she came across as too one-dimensional. From the very beginning while she somewhat intrigued me, I was never able to connect with her. Andrew was much more sympathetic, but there was a distinct lack of character development. Surprisingly, the one I liked the most was the sleazily charming Z who ended up being a much more complicated character then I originally thought. There were so many secrets and lies between these characters that most of the fun came from trying to unravel them all. And best of all was the huge twist at the end which I did not see coming. So, despite my issues with Victoria and Andrew, Unnatural Deeds is still a worthwhile read that older teens and adults who are fond of twisty mysteries with unexpected endings, will enjoy. Cyn Balog is one of my favorite YA authors and I can’t wait to see what she comes up with next!
I requested a copy of this on NetGalley. I haven’t heard anything back but it sounds really good. Lack of character development is one of my pet peeves. Nice review!
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Drat! I’m sorry.😕 If you get a chance I’d still recommend this. Even with the issues I had with two of the main characters, it’s an unforgettable story!💁🏻
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Nice review as always Kim. That is one eerie book cover.
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Thanks Vinnie! The cover definitely matches the story.
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That sounds intriguing. Even though Halloween was yesterday, I just reviewed a horror movie. Check it out. Your opinions are always a ray of light.
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See, you can never watch enough horror movies!
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You are so right. Horror is where it’s at.
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This is another I have to add to my pick it up later list. Sourcebooks just doesn’t like me and declined me yet again on this one but I still think it sounds interesting.
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I’m sorry Carrie. I don’t understand why. I’ve been pre-approved for their books and my book ratio is much lowers than yours.😕
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I’ve never understood it myself. I know someone else with a really really low ratio that gets everything from them too but they just don’t seem to like me for whatever reason. 😦
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My ratio has been getting slowly better, but they approved me back when I was in the 20s, so this is really odd.😕
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Maybe I need to completely mess up my ratio to get books from them? LOL I stay right at 88/89 these days. It takes like 4-5 books to move it up or down a percentage so unless I go crazy it doesn’t really move as quick as I read them and turn them back in.
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Wow that’s an impressive ratio! You should be getting automatic approval from everyone!
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Haha unfortunately it doesn’t seem to work that way. Harlequin, Penguin and Sourcebooks are the three I have the most problems with and it’s funny I know all three approve others with way less of a ratio and even lower stats. Can’t figure it out at all.
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Huh. That is bizarre.😕
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Yep, I gave up trying to figure it out. Now I just chuckle when I get a “here are some profile suggestions mail”. Obviously nothing wrong with my profile to everyone else. LOL
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Ahh you had me until you mentioned second person narration- that’s just a big bugbear me! I’m really intrigued though- so maybe I’ll try it anyway!
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You know, that’s usually a big turn off for me as well, but Balog is an amazing writer who makes this work!💁🏻
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Awesome!!
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I agree with Vinnie, it’s a great cover. But ‘older teens’, and YA?
Does 64 qualify? I think not…
Best wishes, Pete.
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Well, I’m 51 and love YA fiction (I blame being a children’s librarian for 26 years), but to each his own, eh Pete?! LOL!
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I am still catching up with moany old man’s fiction, Kim ! (Is there a M.O.M category, I wonder? ) x
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Haha! M.O.M.! That’s brilliant Pete!😊
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eerie and haunting sounds so good!!! another well-written honest review! 😀
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Thanks Rosema!😊
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you’re welcome! 😀
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