Tags
Abuse, Bigotry, Bullying, Homophobia, School Shootings, YA Fiction
I received this e-Arc from NetGalley and Sourcebooks Fire in exchange for an honest review.
Release Date: January 5th, 2016
Synopsis:
10:00 a.m.
The principal of Opportunity, Alabama’s high school finishes her speech, welcoming the entire student body to a new series semester and encouraging them to excel and achieve.
10:02 a.m.
The students get up to leave the auditorium for their next class.
10:03 a.m.
The auditorium doors won’t open.
10:05 a.m.
Someone starts shooting.
Told over the span of 54 harrowing minutes from four different perspectives, terror reigns as one student’s calculated revenge turns into the ultimate game of survival.
This Is Where It Ends has been a much hyped book since last fall, so when I actually was approved for a coveted e-ARC from the publisher I was thrilled. I’ve been sitting on my hands to stop myself from reading it until closer to the publishing date. After all that, it wound up being one of my biggest disappointments of the past year.
So, where did it go wrong? Well, let’s start with the general layout of the book. Although it’s only 292 pages, I found myself forcing my way through the pages at times and more than once I completely lost focus. The chapters are short, but in addition to alternating between four characters, they also flash back and forth between the horrific events that are unfolding and the past. This made things confusing and disjointed.
And this leads me to what really annoyed me about this novel–the characters. Because of the way the chapters are written it is impossible to get any kind of real sense of these kids, let alone emphasize with them. It also seemed as though the author tried too hard to make the characters diverse, especially for a small southern town. Perhaps this is because Marieke Nijkamp is a member of We Need Diverse Books. While I think I can appreciate what she was attempting, instead this comes off as cynically manipulative. It was almost as if she had a list she went through:
Muslim-American -check
Hispanic-Americans – check
African-American -check
Disabled boy – check
Two gay teens in love – check
Ironically, the person you most want to hear from–the shooter, you don’t except through wooden dialogue. Tyler Browne is an evil, one-dimensional character from beginning to end. Honestly, I kept expecting him to break out in a “Mowahaha!” every five seconds as he strutted in front of his victims. In real life, we’ve unfortunately heard all too many stories of school shooters who were bullied either at school, home or in some cases both. These are not instances of children being teased. No, oftentimes these kids are tormented beyond endurance until they snap. In this story I never came to understand what turned Tyler into the monster he became.There’s a few vague explanations, but nothing I could buy into. The only thing I came away with is that he’s a homophobe and a rapist, who while is physically abused by his alcoholic father, and bullied a little by a few classmates, gives as good as he gets. He even turns on his twin sister Autumn, going as far as to report on her to their father when he knows full well she’ll receive a beating. This is someone who has absolutely no redeeming qualities whatsoever.
This Is Where It Ends could have been a groundbreaking novel that lent itself to some much needed discussion between teens and adults, but instead it’s an exploitative tale that takes real issues such as: physical abuse, bigotry, rape, etc., and reduces them to the kind of cheap thrills you find in some awful Lifetime movie of the week. For those of you who don’t live in the U.S. Lifetime is a cable channel which specializes in “issue oriented” movies. There are so many deaths here that after the first few, I found myself for the most part, not caring anymore. There’s one secondary character who I did become emotionally invested in which is why I’m giving this even 1.5 stars. There are already many reviews on Goodreads and if you are a parent or teacher, I encourage you to read some of them before sharing this with your teens. Because I wanted to make sure I was being fair to this much publicized book, I read it twice, but from my perspective I cannot find anything at all to recommend about it and I can’t tell you how this saddens me.
I tried to request this when I first started on Netgalley but got the “too many requests” decline mail for it. Guess I won’t be too disappointed I missed out after reading your review.
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You really didn’t miss anything Carrie. 😦
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Oh no, I was looking forward to reading this
I read several disappointed reviews for this a while back, mostly everyone is annoyed because it could have been monumental! Thanks for the review and for even reading it twice!
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I really did want to make sure I was being fair. Instead I wound up royally ticked after seeing such potential go to waste. 😦
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Ugh, that can be really frustrating 😦
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It’s sad that this isn’t a better book. I think authors have to be careful when they take on ‘issue’ books. By forcing diversity (I’ll explain in a minute) and making the killer one-dimensional, it’s less believable which actually might do more harm than good if that makes any sense.
I think it’s important to have diversity in characters, writers, locations, etc. One of the reasons I love fantasy is that the authors can integrate anything they want into the world they’ve created and it shows us how our world COULD be. But…if you are writing a book set in the real world, as a reader I feel it needs to show the world as it is. I grew up in a small southern town. We were about 60% Caucasian, 35% African American and 5% Mexican, Japanese, Indian. I’m sure the percentages have changed some since I left about 20 years ago but I still visit regularly and it’s not that far off. If someone set a book there I would expect them to know that and work within it. There are openly gay people living there happily and those that follow non-Christian religions. Gasp, there are even a few atheists. But, it seems forced to have to almost check boxes like you said.
I don’t know if I’ve expressed myself very well on this topic because I do think diversity in books is important. I just don’t think a good writer should force it.
Anyway.
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Thank you for such a thoughtful comment Mary. I hope you didn’t think I was saying that all small southern towns weren’t diverse, because that definitely wasn’t my intention. Heck, I live just north of Boston and the town I live in wasn’t diverse by any measure when I was growing up. It’s just that to me, the author seemed to go out of her way to create “minority” characters for her story. Does that make sense? I haven’t had my coffee yet!
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No, I didn’t feel you were saying that at all, Kim. I’m on my second cup of coffee now so let’s see what comes out. 😉
I think the author does a bit of a disservice by forcing a cast of characters that wouldn’t necessarily make sense. I’ve read that some authors choose to use a diverse cast that they think should be there rather than what is there. Ok…I guess…but again, if you are trying to shed light on an issue, you should keep it based in facts. Just my opinion.
I will say that I do sometimes get frustrated when the media portrays the south as some horribly racist place where no one different gets along. For me, it wasn’t like that. I had friends of every race growing up and I honestly didn’t even see skin color as a thing until I got older. One of my grandmother’s best friends was African American and I never heard her utter a negative word about any race or religion even though that was supposedly common in ‘that generation.’
Today my hometown has its problems but I’m still proud of it. The Chief of Police is an African American man who was placed on leave for investigation a couple months ago. I’ve known him my entire life and refused to believe anything bad about him. The entire town rallied behind him and he was recently reinstated. Also a few months ago a middle aged Caucasian man was arrested for having thousands of guns at his house. That was some craziness but people didn’t start talking conspiracy theories, etc. Last year, a young African American man broke into a restaurant and shot a Latina clerk. Rather than turning on each other, the town came together to support the victims family but also the shooters family. Everybody knows everybody. It does no one any good to point fingers and hate each other.
Sorry so long winded. I got a little off track.
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Well written Mary. I wish my town was that supportive of all its residents. Unfortunately, unless you’re one of the “chosen few” people here always seem ready to turn on each other on a dime. The good news is that this doesn’t seem to have anything to do with race, religion, or sexuality. Instead it’s more of a general malaise that grips our community.😒
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I understand. And, don’t get me wrong, there are people that will turn on each other but thankfully they are in the minority. Most just want to have a peaceful life where we can all get along.
I think it’s up to us as individuals to keep things on the right track. Sometimes that seems impossible but it’s all we have.
Hugs. 😌
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I want to move to your town!
Hugs!😌
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Yuck. You’d think by now such “token checklisting” would be an obvious tactic to avoid. Sorry for your double pains. 😦
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Sigh. Right?! If she had done this believably it would have made me feel closer to the characters, but instead it just further ticked me off.😁
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Oh dear Kim,
I hate it when books end up disappointing you like this!
I too have been hoping to read this one, but after seeing soooo many negative reviews (of course interspersed by the positive ones) about it, I knocked it down to near the bottom of my humongous TBR list – and from the looks of it, rightfully so. It’s a shame really, as you said yourself, it had so much potential to be almost groundbreaking (and perhaps educational too)…
Anyhow, brilliantly written review as always, and of course- many, many kudos for reading a book you didn’t like twice (I’m not entirely sure I would have had enough patience to do the same)
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Thank you for your kind words Ola. This really was a huge disappointment. 😒😣
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I love that you are honest with your reviews. Authors may not like hearing that their work is sub par, but if it is, they NEED to hear it and to hear WHY. You don’t flame. You tell why a book doesn’t do it for you. As an author, I greatly appreciate that.
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Thank you so much for saying that Tamara. One of my least favorite things in the world is write a poor review on an author’s creation. Especially when I have so much admiration for all of you who have successfully travelled that long road to publication.
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Aww I’m so sorry that you didn’t like this 😦
I have heard the same complaints that you have mentioned. It’s really sad that this wasn’t a good book. You’d think with the synopsis there would be something to take away from the story. But that is not the case.
Great review 🙂
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Thanks Fatima. To be perfectly honest I don’t think I’ve been this aggravated with a book since I read Fifty Shades of Gray. 😦
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Oh, bummer! I’m so sad to hear all of the issues with this book. It definitely could have been amazing, but I won’t be picking it up after your review. Thank you for the warning!
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I usually tell people to make up their own minds but I honestly can’t see you liking this one Jen. 😦
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I feel the same way about letting people make up their own mind, but I completely trust your reviews so I’ll be avoiding it. My tr-shelf will actually thank me this one time lol.
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The book does sound interesting. After reading the synopsis I kind of found myself wanting to read it, but 1.5 stars from Kim–I think I’ll pass.
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This is where I’d normally encourage you to try it anyway, but to be perfectly honest Jonathan I think you’d be grinding your teeth.😕
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I’ll have to put it in my very long list of books to read.
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